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Be quiet,
Don't you dare speak without turn,
Try to do so and your results will be vital,
Not only for you but for whom ever dwells about your surroundings,
In this sciatic realm known to all,

Listen with eager, itchy ears,
For what I have to say will not be subsided,
By all your vanity and unseemly pride,
Embrace my words as though nothing could save that torn hearted sample,
You call life,

Be my Venter,
My go to mate when things go astray,
Only because my world didn't care to listen,
They excluded words from me,
Though their ending was rather precious,

Hear, become mute,
To the still silence of my voice,
Nothing can compare or exceed,
If so my actions will compete for glory against the opposing,

As that old saying goes,
"Silence is Golden"
Which is oddly true for you know that meaningless word,
Expressed as Life depends on it,
I warn you once next time's a charm so don't abuse the privilege,
You shall be quite, without words,
Speechless..
I really enjoyed writing this piece ._.
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Maseater Apr 4, 2011  Student Writer
i like this one alot. you have to first understand it reall meaning before you can see its true beauty, this is what i call a masterpiece love it!
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:iconzinkai1:
thanks @O@ and yeah I like to keep the reader guessing >.< its a fav. of mine
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Maseater Apr 4, 2011  Student Writer
i really like your wrighting style
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:iconzinkai1:
thanks xD I tend to like the sense of getting into the readers mind... that leaves them thinking
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Maseater Apr 4, 2011  Student Writer
it really works, at least it did for me
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:iconzinkai1:
yep. and thanks lol likes how we having this convo like we known each other for yrs >< but yeah.
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Maseater Apr 4, 2011  Student Writer
yeah really weird but we kinda understand eachother as it seems
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:iconzinkai1:
hahah totally and yep. when you write more poem i'll me more than happy to read ^-^
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KyraWolf289 Dec 28, 2010  Student Writer
Hey this has been placed in the #UniversalPoets's Most Recent Competition folder and the brief is Romantic Modernism. I'm just running a quick check on all those that haven't put that it is part of the competition in their Artist's Comments that you are entering as judging starts in 3 days?
Thanks
Kyra
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Okay :) and thanks
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